Hearthstone Revisited

After taking some time off this summer, I was able to return to working on Hearthstone (Bloodlust #2) with a renewed sense of confidence. I started reading what I had written and to my surprise I was deeply disappointed with the work thus far. The characters are there, the scenes set, the plot laid out... but something was missing. So after re-evaluating the story I came to a decision to re-work the entire thing from the beginning. Re-jigging chapters and events, introduce characters at different points, and re-visit the DNA of the two main characters. I want the tale to be epic but not long or drawn out, the characters passionate, and transport the reader into a world that is much like our own but very very different. I hope to impress and please and never disappoint.