Autumn is finally here

Thanksgiving was a week ago (for us here in Canada) and now the air is getting a little cooler and the days significantly shorter. I love the changing seasons, it wouldn't feel right if there was no natural end to the summer.

Quick Update:
I haven't been doing much work for my novel or blog as I am having some health issues - acute tendonitis in my right arm (my dominate arm). It is an unpleasant feeling but I will be starting physiotherapy and accupunture this week and that should start healing my arm. In the meantime, I am taking it easy but I can still use the old pen and paper to jot down ideas and notes.

Writing the first chapter hook

Now on my third revision of Hearthstone, I seem to be channeling some of the important lessons I’ve learned over the summer. I spent the last three months taking a break from writing my second book to enjoy the short summer weather (a good thing too since now it’s already coat and gloves season here in Toronto) and to just clear my head. A part of this “clearing of my head” I read a few books, some long novels and some short stories. Most were very good, and a very few were difficult to finish. One of my takeaways from this experience was that a good novel always has a good first chapter – it is the hook. Obvious and self-explanatory but yet we writers always forget because we are so wrapped up in our own minds that we do not see the story the same way as our readers.

The first chapter must have the following elements:

1) Introduction of both the hero and heroine
2) The start must be at some pivotal point of thought or action
3) The end of the chapter should be open ended or the tipping point of an action that will cause the reader to continue to the next chapter to learn what will happen

General guidelines include:

- Keep it simple, keep it real
- Don’t introduce too many characters right away
- Don’t get bogged down on frivolous details unless it is your style of writing and it will be consistent throughout

Happy writing!

Hearthstone Revisited

After taking some time off this summer, I was able to return to working on Hearthstone (Bloodlust #2) with a renewed sense of confidence. I started reading what I had written and to my surprise I was deeply disappointed with the work thus far. The characters are there, the scenes set, the plot laid out... but something was missing. So after re-evaluating the story I came to a decision to re-work the entire thing from the beginning. Re-jigging chapters and events, introduce characters at different points, and re-visit the DNA of the two main characters. I want the tale to be epic but not long or drawn out, the characters passionate, and transport the reader into a world that is much like our own but very very different. I hope to impress and please and never disappoint.